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How does this sound so far [short]?
02-13-2012, 09:04 PM
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How does this sound so far [short]?
The other day i posted a question asking if a plot i had sounded good, the people who answered all liked it. This is the first draft of the opening part. I am only a beginner so go easy on me Smile Constructive criticism is very welcome. Remember this isn't set in stone im just toying around with it.

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03-20-2012, 08:03 PM
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RE: How does this sound so far [short]?
Thats very interesting, good work!

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